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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 30, 2008 13:05:56 GMT -5
Try to have good grammar. Doesn't have to be perfect, but make it so that we can read it, and spelling mistakes are fine :]
Vanessa was walking down the street one day, with her long black hair covering her left eye completely, when she heard a loud screech of car tires to her right.
((Add on please :'D))
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 30, 2008 13:07:28 GMT -5
nice thread !! !
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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 30, 2008 13:12:18 GMT -5
Thanks ... lol
Would you care to continue?
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 30, 2008 13:16:30 GMT -5
yes i shall continue
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nose she could barely breath.. Then her friend Ryan came by and grabbed her and..
please continue
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Post by Zinoula on Aug 30, 2008 13:27:27 GMT -5
I agree
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Post by Zinoula on Aug 30, 2008 13:27:45 GMT -5
Erm oooooo where is my avatar?
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 30, 2008 13:37:48 GMT -5
make dure its just the url and not the site with it
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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 30, 2008 16:11:23 GMT -5
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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 30, 2008 16:17:07 GMT -5
Fine then, I'll continue it :'D
"Vanessa was walking down the street one day, with her long black hair covering her left eye completely, when she heard a loud screech of car tires to her right." She then saw a flash of light, and then everything went black.
Vanessa Black is a normal, un-cool, 10th grade girl awaiting her life to turn. She doesn't have many friends, maybe 2. She never even see's them, or asocciates with them. She ...
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 30, 2008 18:31:46 GMT -5
XD
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Post by Zinoula on Aug 31, 2008 11:57:26 GMT -5
She was sent to hospital. Doctors said that she has lost her memory and only something serious can make remember who she was. . ..
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 31, 2008 17:18:02 GMT -5
xD
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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 31, 2008 20:06:49 GMT -5
"She was sent to hospital. Doctors said that she has lost her memory and only something serious can make remember who she was. . .. "
So she was sent home to her un-loving parents who don't give a crap about her. She sat in her room, crying herself to sleep every night. Soon enough, one of her friends, Jack Leinheart, stopped by her house.
Jack hadn't seen Vanessa in over a month, he started to get worried. So he jumped off his ratty, torn, green puke colored bed to come and see her that afternoon.
((Sorry, I got carried away xD))
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Post by Jenn_the_Admin~ on Aug 31, 2008 20:12:00 GMT -5
WOW u did !
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Post by MaDeH_TeH_MoD on Aug 31, 2008 20:13:59 GMT -5
Want me to continue again? I'm in a writing mood ^_^
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